Monday, 21 November 2011

Evalution from last year - Emily

  • This is the evaluation from last years AS video. In this video we speak about the negatives and positives and what we could have done to improve our thriller opening. We speak about how we could have improved the editing, the filming and various other things that had an impact on our video. In the opening, we focused on a story within which a young child gets abducted, and the initial impact it has on the mother and the child, yet we made sure not to give too much away so that the watcher was still drawn into watching the rest of the film. Overall we felt we did a successful job with the short opening, but we recognised and acknowleged what we could have improved on.

2 comments:

  1. Although this says it's embedded in the url, it isn't embedded properly on the blog. Make sure you've done this correctly and upload it again.

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  2. Still very insufficient research and evidence from you Emily. You need to do this immediately to avoid losing a lot of marks at this stage. 25 marks for this remember!

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