After reading my supervisor's comments I decided to make some changes to my poster design. These changes included making the reviews smaller, to give more room for the title and tagline. Also the canted nature of the title has changed, as I have split the two words 'sleep' and 'tight', so they form the title on two lines of the poster at the top right; though it is still canted the two words are canted to different angles which shows the antithesis between the two ideas in our film (sleep and tight). I think this looks betters as it has more emphasis on the tagline, and the reviews hold their own in the right bottom corner and look more professional smaller. I chose not to change the size of the stars as I feel they needed to be bigger in order to draw the eye towards that corner.
I notice you haven't used the same font here as you have in the film itself. This will need recognising in your evaluation as it is a problem. As we advised, you needed to create this whole portfolio as linked items - this is branding. There are also issues with spacing, font sizing and variations in font on the actual poster.
I notice you haven't used the same font here as you have in the film itself. This will need recognising in your evaluation as it is a problem. As we advised, you needed to create this whole portfolio as linked items - this is branding. There are also issues with spacing, font sizing and variations in font on the actual poster.
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