This is the second draft of the my film poster. The colours and fonts are not how they will be in the final piece but this draft is mainly to show the positioning and text that I plan on using.
This appears to be a sound design, but as you suggest, you do need to reduce font size and change a lot in the layout of text in relation to image. Where's your tagline? This is an essential part of the task.
I am very concerned about your blog and general progress now however. Your blog is far too incomplete at this stage, and by now, you really should have caught up with all other groups. As this blog stands, it still wouldn't achieve a secure pass. Both of you need to do far more out of college and this needs URGENT attention if you wish to avoid losing a lot of marks. Look on my blog at other groups' blogs and see what you haven't done. We have quite a few groups of 2 or 1 this year, so you are no worse off than many others.
Fred - you need to have a much higher profile still on the blog. You appeared to be aware of the huge amount of work you needed to do on Tuesday, but I see NO evidence of you acting on this! You are playing a dangerous game with the assessment, which is currently looking like it will end with you achieving few marks at any stage. Take a more mature and responsible approach to the work please.
This appears to be a sound design, but as you suggest, you do need to reduce font size and change a lot in the layout of text in relation to image. Where's your tagline? This is an essential part of the task.
ReplyDeleteI am very concerned about your blog and general progress now however. Your blog is far too incomplete at this stage, and by now, you really should have caught up with all other groups. As this blog stands, it still wouldn't achieve a secure pass. Both of you need to do far more out of college and this needs URGENT attention if you wish to avoid losing a lot of marks. Look on my blog at other groups' blogs and see what you haven't done. We have quite a few groups of 2 or 1 this year, so you are no worse off than many others.
ReplyDeleteFred - you need to have a much higher profile still on the blog. You appeared to be aware of the huge amount of work you needed to do on Tuesday, but I see NO evidence of you acting on this! You are playing a dangerous game with the assessment, which is currently looking like it will end with you achieving few marks at any stage. Take a more mature and responsible approach to the work please.
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