Good to see this in its entirety now. However, your credits at the end are problematic - if all of these other people were responsible for these roles, how can you both be awarded marks for these crucial aspects of mise en scene etc? It raises questions about your own roles in the process, and whilst there is nothing to contradict these titles on the blog, this poses a significant problem for assessment. You need to do urgent work on the blog, as I keep saying, and you also need to discuss these credits with me - they cannot be left like this (I don't know these names at all!).
OK - it's back now, or perhaps it was a problem with my mac. I think there are a lot of strengths in this film, but you'll could lose this advantage if you don't discuss the narrative twists, turns and sense of subjectivity carefully. Think carefully about making the most of your seemingly obsessive compulsive narrative structure.
Ghislaine 1. Follow the story line? I understood the story line slightly, what I thought happened was that he kept having dreams of hurting his wife, and in the end had a dream about killing his wife, but they weren’t dreams in the end, he actually killed her? 2. Do you empathise with the female character? We can empathise with her because we feel how scared she is. But also with the male character, we can feel his worry and how scared he is. 3. Camera & editing Good camera work, I liked the different shots used and the transition from reality and dream? 4. Target Audience 16-25 male I think it was targeted perfectly at 16-25; this is because 16 year olds will relate to the young characters and the 25 year olds will be able to understand what is going slightly more. 5. Mise en Scene Really nice shot of Cuckfield at the beginning really sets the mood of a thriller – the sky is red representing blood. The lighting is done really well especially when the girl was in the corner – there is a spot light on her and everything else is black, this shows that no one can help her, she has to face it alone. Overall, really liked it :)
Good to see this in its entirety now. However, your credits at the end are problematic - if all of these other people were responsible for these roles, how can you both be awarded marks for these crucial aspects of mise en scene etc? It raises questions about your own roles in the process, and whilst there is nothing to contradict these titles on the blog, this poses a significant problem for assessment. You need to do urgent work on the blog, as I keep saying, and you also need to discuss these credits with me - they cannot be left like this (I don't know these names at all!).
ReplyDeletetheyre made up people...we were told we needed to bulk it out by adding names just like last year so it looked professional..
ReplyDeletei have changed it now marion :)
ReplyDeleteThe film seems to have disappeared from the blog?? Can you re upload straight away please? Is the film long enough without the credits you'd added?
ReplyDeleteOK - it's back now, or perhaps it was a problem with my mac.
ReplyDeleteI think there are a lot of strengths in this film, but you'll could lose this advantage if you don't discuss the narrative twists, turns and sense of subjectivity carefully. Think carefully about making the most of your seemingly obsessive compulsive narrative structure.
Ghislaine
ReplyDelete1. Follow the story line?
I understood the story line slightly, what I thought happened was that he kept having dreams of hurting his wife, and in the end had a dream about killing his wife, but they weren’t dreams in the end, he actually killed her?
2. Do you empathise with the female character?
We can empathise with her because we feel how scared she is. But also with the male character, we can feel his worry and how scared he is.
3. Camera & editing
Good camera work, I liked the different shots used and the transition from reality and dream?
4. Target Audience 16-25 male
I think it was targeted perfectly at 16-25; this is because 16 year olds will relate to the young characters and the 25 year olds will be able to understand what is going slightly more.
5. Mise en Scene
Really nice shot of Cuckfield at the beginning really sets the mood of a thriller – the sky is red representing blood.
The lighting is done really well especially when the girl was in the corner – there is a spot light on her and everything else is black, this shows that no one can help her, she has to face it alone.
Overall, really liked it :)